So it seems I'm joining the party a lil' late...but, you'll forgive me, right? Join our host, Kathleen at
Growing Kinders for the link up. Onto
Chapter 8: Precision and Detail...kinda sounds like surgery, huh? I promise my post won't be painful...
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In Pictures and In Words by Katie Wood Ray |
This chapter continues with
descriptions of illustration techniques with a strong emphasis on details, details, DETAILS...that we can use in our writing demonstrations and also during writing conferences with our students. I am going to discuss only a
few of my favorites...
How does Mo Willems NOT come to mind when thinking about
Technique 13: Crafting Details of Expression and Gesture AND
Technique 20...
Creating the Illusion of Motion with Detail...I mean, just LOOK at these illustrations...and
that face...these are from
The Pigeon Finds a Hot Dog!
but you could use
any of his titles...the kids just love 'em!!
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use your different voices HERE |
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and HERE |
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L-O-V-E that look... |
As a reader, you get so much from the
simple, expressive, yet vibrant illustrations...there's much more meaning
beyond what you see. My kiddos can relate to
loving eating hot dogs, someone asking them to share (when they really don't want to), and someone bothering them with their mere presence (brothers and sisters). The books are fun to read, and you get to use
voices...ok, well, maybe that's just ME...
How about
Amazing Christmas Extravaganza
by David Shannon?! His books just
scream with
Technique 19: Using Authentic, Object-Specific Details...if you've read this book, then you know the pages are FILLED from top-to-bottom and side-to-side with illustrations...it's almost sensory overload, I tell ya! Look at the string of ornaments circling the text, the red and green colors of the quilt, the huddled faces (and bright red noses) of the family under the bed...

The last technique I will share with you is
Technique 22: Using Details as an Element of Surprise which brought to mind
First Day Jitters
by Julie Danneberg. It's one of those if-you-played-close-attention-to-the-illustrations...you would have figured that it was about...SPOILER ALERT...a teacher's first day of school (or you may have had a new kid that
blurted out said, "I read this at my old school, and it's about the teacher) and not a
student's first day of school...
If you thought about it, how many of your kiddos actually have robes?
Exactly...plus there's the part where it refers to
Mr. Hartwell instead of
dad...and there's a lil' bit of
Technique 21: Creating the Illusion of Sound with Details (man, I'm getting good at this)...the spilled water and cat screeching...the dog barking...the alarm going off...
This book study is making me
fall in love with my books all over again...but you can read more about
that here :)
I'd love to hear from you! What will you do differently when introducing the techniques of
describing details in illustrations with your kiddos?
I'm so enjoying this study! I love First Day Jitters! I use it during the first week at school. The kids are always so surprised by the ending.
ReplyDeleteJenny
Owl Things First
Hi, Jenny! I love all the great book suggestions that everyone is sharing! This book study is making me look at illustrations in a whole new light...ha, ha, kinda cheesy...
DeleteMy kiddos never think about teachers getting nervous on the first day :)